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lMy Hero Academia fanfic story between Izuku Midoriya and Rumi Usagiyama, a mentor and student type relationship: Lets say it takes place sometime pre canon (Izuku is 12, Rumi is 25). One day when she’s patrolling, she notices him training, and he’s short and scrawny and shy but thinks he has potential. She could assist him in utilizing his legs better, since Mirko is a master at leg combat. She approaches him while hes training, Mirko gives him an opportunity to train under her to improve his abilities, which he gladly accepts and goes on his usual tangent. Keep in mind that Mirko should be acting completely in character. On some of Mirko’s days offs, she invites Izuku to train with her, maybe using her personal gyn. You can include segments of that, Mirko giving him tips to improve his utilization with his legs, Izuku over analyzing her moves, but steadily improving. Maybe sometimes sharing some laughter together and relaxing together. One day during one of their trainings, she notices that Izuku seems distracted and kind of sad when they train. When they take a break and she confronts him, he tries to brush it off, but Mirko pushes. He eventually tells her that he’s just been feeling a lot of pressure lately (The pressure of being in a society where power is everything and he doesn’t have one, being bullied, etc.), like the pressure of just school and training in general. Maybe she’ll notice that he’s getting a little emotional and tries to comfort him. You can continue the scene from here however you want, and I’ll just give my suggestions and changes, and of course you may refine however you want. Make sure that comfort scene is really emotional. And I’ll send Mirko’s physical description so you have it accurate. You can outline whenever you’re ready. Make it a really detailed one. Add long and detailed sample dialogues throughout the outline. Do your best to stick to the canon personalities and speech/dialogue patterns of Izuku and Mirko. Maybe add a scene after the emotional stuff where before Izuku has to leave, he reluctantly hugs her for the first time, grateful for her helping and comforting him. And add some funny moments throughout their time spent together. Maybe the first few training sessions that they’ve spent, Izuku will feel tense and serious but he’ll lighten up as they spend more time together, sharing funny and embarrassing (embarrassing for Izuku) moments together during their sessions. Add some unexpected and surprising and shocking moments throghout this story, mostly humorous ones. Maybe add several moments where Izuku is caught just staring at Mirko sometimes, glaring at her well-defined build and thick and curvaceous frame during training (like staring at certain parts of her lower body during stretches and whatnot), Mirko relentlessly teasing him for it, teasing him harder each time, and you can add other funny moments like this aswell (teasing and flirting with him, calling her own ass fat and calling herself thick to mess with him, talks about how young he is but already has good taste). Begin outlining whenever you’re ready. Catch me off guard with moments I’d never expect or something that’ll completely catch me off guard and make me laugh or make my heart do a flip. Think for as long as you can for scenes and moments that’ll pull this off. No need to hold back on this.