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Te voy a mostrar una conversación que tuve con otra inteligencia artificial y de ahí tú sacas lo demás q me piden aquí: Sí me parece bien igualmente puedes ir añadiéndole cosas y recuerda pues los links que estar en el primer mensaje puedes ver las historias y cómo quiero que pues sea como la narración Y pues cómo se exprese Por así decirlo y además pues Haeun también tiene amigos no sé amigas y así no sé. Recuerda q es narrado en primera persona. 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Basate en la peronaslid de adicción, no sé. Y escribiré ya. No quiero que todo sea sumamente rápido, que sientan atracción y ajá :v. Fíjate también en los links de "loco" El ritmo y los personajes, todo muy plano. Falta que no estás siguiendo el estilo de narración de nada de eso, no te expresas como los links que te envié. Los diálogos son muy superficiales y no hay un proceso detrás de todo. Además quiero que sea real, que se vea que es una verdadera modelo y que Jungkook no solo sus amigos hagan todo, sino que él también sea el que pone dinero, sí, pero la maestra también Quiero escenas explicas, nada de diálogos vacíos, y que tengan buena personalidad. Buenos personajes secundarios, te envié muchos ejemplos así que analiza los bien